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Bionicle- N.O.- Mystery of the Toa Miro- Prologue by NickinAmerica Bionicle- N.O.- Mystery of the Toa Miro- Prologue by NickinAmerica
I've submitted this to the comics category because... Well, I just don't know where else to put this. :(

Chapter One >> nickinamerica.deviantart.com/a…

Bionicle- Nova Orbis gallery >> nickinamerica.deviantart.com/g…

Anyway... it isn't much, but hey, it's my first go at telling a story with this style.

Really, though... considering I can write an entire chapter in a day if I have the time for it, and it only took me, like, two and a half sheets of pager to tell what would've eaten up, like, 7 pages on an actual comic... I might be on to something, with this.

Anyway... I hope you enjoy this first taste of what's in store.

Feedback is appreciated.
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PrehistoricEchoes Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm enjoying this so far. Onto the next chapter!
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burkeonthesly Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
I'll admit, I'm curious. You've got that writerly knack for ending each page with something that makes the reader crave the next.
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Orionide5 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Nice! The story and art are great together.
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ArakalFlamescale Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
Would like to read more of this XD
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Innodence Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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MuddyKip64 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
I already feel like this is a vast world.  Which I tend to like in the stories I read.  

I also like how this is half way between a comic and a book.  It just feels...right.  
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DarkSuperShadow64 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is looking great so far. You tend to be inconsistent with the spelling of Piras, though. One moment it's Pyras and the next it's Piras.

Aside from that, this is looking great. 
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NickinAmerica Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Woah, WHAT? Where is it spelled with a Y? I could swear I found them all...
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DarkSuperShadow64 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Just do a quick proof read. You'll find it.
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NickinAmerica Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
I did proof read this... several times. Just finally found those (hopefully) last two instances and fixed them.
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